Here's Mohamed's message in a bottle from Ben Gunn.
Dear sir
I am at the ISLAND . LIFE is very good on the Island .
What I miss about home is that you can
do very fun stuff but at the island you have no one to talk to . I feel sad
because CAPTIN Flint left me . AND also
I feel anxious about him. Why oh why did he maroon me . HOW I wish I was at Bristol with all the other people . He hid
the treasure on the island and left me all alone and said get out of my ship . I
AM at this boring island.
From
Ben Gun.
BY Mohamed
Great use of "why, oh why" as we practised in literacy Mohamed. I particularly like your use of: 'anxious' and 'maroon'. Can you identify a question in your writing that needs a question mark?
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